Essay 2 My treasure version

My treasure is my dog which is a female and Japanese dog.She has very cute big brown eyes, brown hair and long tail. She looks like a fox. That she lies on her back is a cute gesture. Her specialty is going up onto the roof. She often has a nap there. She seems to be happy.
She came to my home when I was an elementary school student.
She was very cute since she was a puppy. My brother and I wanted to have a dog as a pet. We asked my parents if we could have a dog. They allowed it. We went to pet shops to see dogs every weekend. But we didn't buy a dog. One day, my mother heard the news that the people were looking for people who wanted a dog. The dog was thrown away. My mother suggested us that we have one. We agreed with her opinion. Immediately, my mother came back home with the dog. When first met her, she was shaking and small. I haven’t thought that she is full of vigor. My mother named her "Sena". My brother and I promised my parents that we would take care of her. I have taken her walking and fed her. When I play with her and stay with her, I feel calm and warm up my heart. I cherish her as a member of family.
She hates the animal’s hospital. She refuses to enter there. But she slips on the floor; she enters there in bad homor. She looks very funny, I laugh every time. She hates bananas; she can’t eat.And she hates shampooing so she becomes quiet. She is sad when she gets chewed out by my mother.
She likes playing with my family,eating foods and sleeping. She is a good runner. So I can’t win against her at running. She has a special sporting ability. She was used to leap over the fence; she broken out of her house before. My family loves her. We need her. I think that I want to grow up with her.(347)

India Curry

My boyfriend and I went to the India Curry to eat curry. I love naan currys. I like spicy flavor. This is made of spinachs, tomotos, chikins and beens. I like beens is the best.It is very delieciaous. I want to go to all curry shops of Kumamoto to eat. Curry is one of my favorite foods.(58)

Last Friday

I went to Fukuoka to watch a base ball game (Soft bank vs Cape) with my father. He went back home late, we had in a hurry. He flied down the road by 130 km/h. we took a hour and 5 minutes. We made it in time. Soft bank was wining. Fall balls was very dangerous. I didn't know base ball rules. But I enjoyed a times. Soft bank win the game, we watched fair flower of win. It was very beautiful. We went back home at 1 A.M. So I was very sleepy.(97)

Wednesday

I went to the driving school at Wednesday. I couldn't sleep yesterday. I couldn't drive safety. I have to sleep more. I want to graduate from there. And I study the examine. I want to be a good driver. I ate the ics cream. It was a chess cake flavor. I like it. I want to eat it every day. I love ice creams.(66)

Essay 2 "My treasure"

My treasure is my dog. First, the dog is a female. She is a Japanese dog. She has very cute big brown eyes, brown hair and long tail. She looks like a fox. That she lies on her back is a cute gesture. Her specialty is going up onto the roof. She often has a nap there. She seems to be happy.
Second, she came to my home when I was an elementary school student. She is very cute and shin since she was a puppy. I and my brother wanted to have a dog as a pet. We asked my parents having a dog. They allowed doing. We went to pets shops to see dogs every weekend. But we didn't buy a dog. One day, my mother heard the news. The people searched having a dog. The dog was thrown away. My mother suggested us that we have one. We agreed with her opinion. Immediately, my mother went back home with the dog. When first met her, she is shaking and a small. I didn't think that she is full of vigor. My mother named her "Sena". I and my brother promised my parents taking care of her. I take a walking with her and feed her. When I play her and stay with her, I feel calm and warm up my heart. I cherish her as a member of family.
Third, she hated the hospital of animals. She denies entering there. But the floor is slip on; she entered there in bad humor. I am interested her form. I laugh every time. She hates bananas, she can't eat it. And she hates shampooing. She becomes quitting. She is sad when she get chewed out by my mother.
Finally, she likes playing with my family, eating foods, sleeping. She is run fast. I can't win running. She has a special exercise to ability. She flied over the fence; she broke out her house before.
My family loves her. We need to her. I think that I want to grow up with her.(347)

weekly 6

I was intersted in English when I was a elmentry school student. Because My English teacher toaght me it in a joyful way. I enjoied study English. So I like English. But I couldn't get good grades. And I entered the high school, I thought I want to see moveis without subtitle. So I major in English at the university. I must study English hard. I try to learn off words ten a day.(75)

weekly 5

I have a lot of foods of strong likes or dislikes. I introduce about likeing foods. For example, Curry, chocorates, icecreams, breads, coffee, vasetables. But i don't like meet, race, bananas, sushi of maguro, flied foods, nuts. I didn't like natto before but I could eat it. Now I like it. It's deliecious. I try to overcome dislikes for my health. I am thinking how to lose them.(71)

My Treasure Outline

Biscuit

"Time for bed, Biscuit!", "Woof, woof!"

I read this, Biscuit is a puppy. She is a very cute and such a baby. And I have a dog which is a female. I thought that I felt nostalgic when she is a puppy. I recommed you. Because you will want to have pets.(46)

YL="0.4-0.6",Words"132",Story by ALYSSA SATIN CAPUCILLI

weekly 4

I will go to my grandfather's home from May 2 to 3. I see him first for long time. He has a illness. I am worry about his health. I wish he is active. May 4 is no schedule. May 5 is my brother's birthday. He will be 18 years old. My family celebrates his day. May 6 is to see a movie with my friends. I am very excited.(72)

weekly 3

My hobby is drawing pictures in my free time. I image designs, draw what I feel then. I draw person, flowers, dogs, cats. I like drawing time because I forget bad things. But also I see famous pictures. I want to be a illustrator. I try to take test for certification of color in this year. I have to study it.(61)

Weekly 1

I used computers lesson at first time. I couldn't computers, I hate computers, I was not good at well. First, I typed my spring vacation's homework. I had a lot of mistakes. It took 15 minute. I didn't use grammar. I have to practice it. My teacher gives me homework. It is to read three books. And I Will have to bring one of them next week.(70)

Weekly 2

My favorite music group is L'Arc~en ~Ciel. I love hyde as a vocal of them. He is very shot and shy. But his voice is very vigorous and beautiful. He is very alluring person. Their music is rock so music is hard. But they have a lot of ballades. There are very good and interesting has a flavor of sorrow.(62)

Weekly 0

I stated working part-time as I was a saleswoman of uniform at TSURUYA at March. I gave up another part-time job by January. My job was measuring up uniform of students. I have never messed at once. It was difficult for me to do. I practiced doing with friends again and again. I chose just a uniform. I could not measure exactly and smoothly. But I experienced much, I could do well. I was happy. I learned measuring. I caught a cold because there were a lot of people having a cold. I was absent from part-time job last. It though I spent my a little bad spring vacation.(112)

The Magic Key

"The Magic key starts to glow."

This story is fantstic and varture. I love Magic. This is look like "tool of Doraemon". It is a small light. I want to explore small world. I felt big things all things. It is very excited.(47)

YL"0.5-0.5", words"273",

Cinderella

"You? Go to the ball? said Cinderella's stepmother. YOu must  be joking. You belong in the kitchen." But Cinderella's fairy godmother has other ideas. With a wave of her wand, the magic begins. Cinderella's life is about to change forever. This story is very famous. But English is a little difficult. But It was interesting. The magic is good.(62)

YL"1.4-1.6", Words"1600"Retold By Susanna Davidson

Essay 1"My Introduction"

Hello. My name is Reika. There are four people in my family. We have a dog called Sena. My father is a salary man. He works in a bank. He goes back his home late everyday. My mother’s job is a waitress at Chinese restaurant afternoon six days a week. She is very busy. My brother is a high school student; he plays rugby after school because he joins in rugby club activity. My dog is very cute and active I love her. I am an undergraduate student. I study English and enjoy college life.

I am interested in America culture and movies. I like painting pictures when I have free time. Another hobby is cooking. I find recipes on the Internet. I like Japanese foods. But I like vegetable pastas too. I don’t like beef. Nice to meet you.

What foods do you recommend? Where do you often go with your friends? What subjects do you like best? Do you know Japanese culture? Where do they sell Japanese food?(228)

I can’t speak English well. So I may not understand. What you say. But I want to be a good English speaker, If you would like to teach me articulate beautiful. I wish get on well with you.

Please call me Reika. I am 19 years old. I’m Gemini. I am born in Jane 8. Rains a lot in Jane in Japan. I don’t like rains.

Please talk to me more. Thank you very much.

The Little Mermaid

"Tomorrow I will b foam on the sea. I have lost everything I love."

What this book is about "The Little Mermaid"

Everyone knows mermaids can't love humans. But when the Little Mermaid falls in love, she will risk everything to win her prince. I felt why was called The Little Mermaid. I found taking true love.(46) 

Retold by Deborash Hautzig, YL"1.4-2.0", words"1939"

My golden week

I went to my gland father's house on May 2 and 3. I gave my gland mother and father 50th anniversary presents. It os pair of madcap. They  were very pleased. But they were not better health. So I was worry it.  We talked about a lot of topics. I was very interesting.  I went to see a move on May 6. The day is ladies' day by 1000 yen.  Te title is " Close 2 zero". This story is fighting action. It was very excited. But the move was very long time. I wanted to go to W.C. (100)

A Monster Mistake

"There is no such thing."

I read " A Monster Mistake". This is a funny story. I felt that Joke is not all that bad. I recommended you!!(35)

YL"0.5-0.5", words"334",

Cooking

I cooked dinner on April 24. I made paste of meet sauce and stir-fry spinach, corn, bacon with soy sauce. First, I sliced onion, garrlic. And I fried meet and them, added tomato. Finally, stewed with solt and pepper. One is completion! Next, I cut vagetables and bacon, added batter, stir-fry them with soy sauce. That's all!! It was very easy but it is very delicious!!(69)

My friend

I played with my friend on April 6. I saw her from first long tome. I made friend since I was a high school student. She is very interesting girl. And she is very cute. She is a nurse school student. She lives in Saga. She was not different past. I talked about boyfriends, our school, our friends. We were excited. We went to shopping to Tsuruya. She want to buy a porch. She found cute one. And we made up by makeup artist. We were very beautiful. Next, we took a print club. I was very amusing but I was fun. We ate curry of soi. It was delicious. And I ate a cake.(115)

Found

I like Japanese-style confections. I love Dorayaki. I like Azuki. My mother bought them. There were Kastera Manjyus. First, I thought they were brackish. I didn't eat them. But she recommended me. I was reluctant to eat one of them. And I felt it is very delicious!! To reject without even having tried it is What a waste! To try to do is very courage but adventure is to find new worlds.(74)