Essay 2 "My treasure"

My treasure is my dog. First, the dog is a female. She is a Japanese dog. She has very cute big brown eyes, brown hair and long tail. She looks like a fox. That she lies on her back is a cute gesture. Her specialty is going up onto the roof. She often has a nap there. She seems to be happy.
Second, she came to my home when I was an elementary school student. She is very cute and shin since she was a puppy. I and my brother wanted to have a dog as a pet. We asked my parents having a dog. They allowed doing. We went to pets shops to see dogs every weekend. But we didn't buy a dog. One day, my mother heard the news. The people searched having a dog. The dog was thrown away. My mother suggested us that we have one. We agreed with her opinion. Immediately, my mother went back home with the dog. When first met her, she is shaking and a small. I didn't think that she is full of vigor. My mother named her "Sena". I and my brother promised my parents taking care of her. I take a walking with her and feed her. When I play her and stay with her, I feel calm and warm up my heart. I cherish her as a member of family.
Third, she hated the hospital of animals. She denies entering there. But the floor is slip on; she entered there in bad humor. I am interested her form. I laugh every time. She hates bananas, she can't eat it. And she hates shampooing. She becomes quitting. She is sad when she get chewed out by my mother.
Finally, she likes playing with my family, eating foods, sleeping. She is run fast. I can't win running. She has a special exercise to ability. She flied over the fence; she broke out her house before.
My family loves her. We need to her. I think that I want to grow up with her.(347)